The Mystery Of Love Poem by yolandey breedt

The Mystery Of Love

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the beauty of the colour of ur eyes
with one amazing powerful sparkled glance
i am binded by ur magical charm

the gorgous way u tend to smile
takes me to anther world in a deep trance
i am under a spell i know wont cause me harm
were i still keep wondering about ur unexplained mystery

the gentle and romantic way u touch me
completes me and sets my hidden emotion free
were i realise to me u are more than a friend

calm are my thoughts as i think of only u
my heart beating to its own tune as it sings ur name
permently i find my self lost in the ways of u

as i explore every part of u
accepting that to me everything about u
is my unending and everlasting dream come true

Friday, March 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a feeling that is unexplained as its got more than one way
to express its self
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 30 November 2017

Seems marital sort of love which is the purest one, I think. The sincerity of the poetess is self evident here. A good poetic sense indeed. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 August 2017

am binded by ur magical charm your unexplained mystery your smile a deep trance, your touch, my desire..... my dream.. these are the points i collected from your poem after reading it and rereading it carefully.. a fine love poem full of desire and passion. thank you for your great expressions.. tony

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