Besa Dede


Tears From The Moon - Poem by Besa Dede

I swear,
Tonight I saw tears running down from the Moon.
You might think I am crazy,
Or that I daydream hazy in the middle of the night.
No Sir!
I swear, I caught a glimpse of those silver drops
Go down the scorched cheeks of that sleeping beauty.
I felt her pain grow big like a threatening black hole.
I saw her sadness spread all over the Milky Way.
For she can't be close to the one she longs for.
The Moon I mean.
She is the secret lover of the Sun.
Didn't you know?
Shush, don't pry.
You'll make the Earth jealous.


Comments about Tears From The Moon by Besa Dede

  • Bronze Star - 2,070 Points Sekharan Pookkat (3/21/2014 8:57:00 AM)

    Oh secret lover
    your glimpse of silver drops
    filled the empty space
    in heaven and earth (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Hassan Adan (3/27/2012 5:36:00 AM)

    this poem is very good and I enjoyed reading it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Drew Swartz (3/22/2012 5:13:00 AM)

    probably my favorite that I've read by you! Hope to see others with things of nature. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Aditi Khandelwal (3/6/2012 10:22:00 AM)

    such a sweet poem and soo cute! Such an intresting idea that moon and sun are lovers and moon is sad because it cant be near ro the sun... And the earth is jealous... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gordon Tseng (3/5/2012 10:44:00 PM)

    Nice work! I love it and would like to share my similar work.(also another one A LOVE SONG BY THE STAR)

    Eclipse

    Their hug is too quick for the moon to bind
    Her shy love to the sun’s glowing mind
    Just because they both always find
    People down there are watching behind. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,292 Points Kevin Patrick (3/5/2012 11:59:00 AM)

    To lovers divided by the span of space. Beautiful piece love the texture that flows through this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R.k Das (3/5/2012 12:16:00 AM)

    a highly symbolical poem, , it opens up diverse avenues of interpretation and meanings, and this is the hallmark of good poetry, , the title of teh poem is beautifully striking, , thanx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (3/3/2012 1:27:00 PM)

    Cute and good. I like. Read mine - Frost Flowers - I think you may be the only one who can guess what I'm talking about.
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,289 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (3/2/2012 7:10:00 PM)

    Well written and quite interesting poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 2, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, January 31, 2014


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