Tears Of Ocean Poem by ramesh rai

Tears Of Ocean

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If the ocean weeps
where it will find tears

When the sky weeps
it drizzles, commove in sky

but what the ocean will do
billions of creatures survive
on its heart, will be prey
of tears of ocean

Joys and sorrows are made for all
why not it is toughest stone
melts with warmth of sun ray
freezes with coldness of moon ray

Love impinge with both
versatile effect of love is every where

Then why ocean will not weep
contd,......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 02 June 2013

Ramesh, this is excellent piece! hmmmm so nice_Soul

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Heather Wilkins 01 June 2013

an excellent poem. when it rains the sky cries.

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when the oceans weeps, it bursts into tears of volcanic eruption from the ground to call it Tsunami..a beautiful poem on impossibility..

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Dave Walker 17 May 2013

A great poem, like it.

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Shahzia Batool 13 May 2013

A poem is never finished, only abandoned...says Paul Valéry, .... so that's why it is continued! a deep and different poem!

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