Teen Aged Human... Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Teen Aged Human...



The sleek bamboo shies away,
The stems of banana weep and cry,
Petals of chosen flowers hide and see,
How elegant you are at your teens, human.
The sun flowers just follow in obedience,
Where ever you go and disobedience,
To the sun is visually noted,
Angry sun looking for another flower,
To replace this infidel yellow flower.
When you walk in the garden,
The freshly bloomed flowers,
Close their petals,
For the fear of being ridiculed,
Just in the presence of,
your natural fragrance.
After Looking at your teeth,
Pearls of the ocean,
May go for a Whitening treat and
they may want to scale off the dirt that formed them.
When the wind meet the lady human at her teens,
It tries to blow as soft as the lady walks
When the moon meets the gentleman human at his teens,
She may show him the whitest face,
On full moon day to be his bride,
On new moon day.
If the sun passes by the lady human at her teens,
he will prostrate in front of her,
to choose him as a flower,
to wear on her plaited hair.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 29 July 2012

Nature is God and Mother giving us a lot of messages!

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Besa Dede 27 March 2012

This poem is very well written, with combining and comparing components to the nature of the human being, with the nature of things and objects that surround us. I like the metaphors you have used in this poem, they brighten your narration. I enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to your next ~Besa

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