do i need eyes if they can't
shed one meaningful tear?
do i need lips if they can't
stretch in one spontaneous smile?
do i need a mind if it can't
think of you?
do i need a heart if it can't
vibrate for you...? ? ?
tell me...
18feb2010
owwwww...very nice.very smart..i need to tell you all of these coz my eyes never lie, my lips will always tell the truth...lavs ya...smileeeeeeeeeeee
Hmmm your poetry has told it eloquently-mute and subsubtly…words are not worth! ! 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
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Very sensitive. Touching. Full of life. A verse of nine lines and the word 'can't' pops up four x, and you're asking: tell me. i will only cry if you cry with me only smile if you smile with me how must I know please tell me. Thnx for sharing. Blessings. Leonard