I love you,
I need you,
I want you,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?
You're beautiful,
You're funny,
You're strong,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?
I'm trying,
I'm hurting,
I'm yours,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?
You kiss me,
You touch me,
You have me,
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?
Is it me?
Is it you?
Is it her?
Why can't you
Tell me you love me?
We'd be happy,
We'd be stable,
We'd be more,
If you could
Tell me you love me.
Bless really nice and i hope he told you he loves you - if you love someone you should tell them every day but sometime its just nice to know they do.
this is a beautiful poem.your real emotion is written here..but don't be confused of your feelings, love will just come in a right time...grace
Now i understand why everything is in one block, although if i were you i would try to use a computer rather than a phone. As for this poem, normally i hate lines being repeated, but i think this is one of the rare occasions this works for me.
Nice persuasive write-up... Repetition of words gives impressive effect.. You convey what you want to say without even an iota haziness.10 +++++ Regards Kushal
I like the structure you have. The repetition of a phrase is always a good device. I also liked the purpose behind this writing. And the focus was clear. Good job. GW62
I love you............................... good poem. hehe
i really enjoyed this poem it was really welll written and im always a sucker for love peotry... so 10/10 here
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Just has that asking for love feeling.