Templates Of An Eternal Journey Poem by bhuvana R...

Templates Of An Eternal Journey

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Starting with the cry
Making others smile
Did you weep for thee?
Or the drops of the Lord
For the things in waiting?

Drawing the milk
From the fountain of love
Kicking the rock
With legs so fragile
Was it a prelude of the future?

Defecating around
Caring for none and
Bothering all
Pampered for every fall
Are all drama enacted in advance?

Getting back to senses
Parting ways with near
Dating with the unknown
Betting the life for nothing
You fall a prey for the flames of love!

Marriage to martyrdom
Mayhem as way of life
Passage of time
Partying with health
Pulse gets down for the journey eternal!

Is it not the time
To laugh at last
When others start weeping
Keeping things aside
And close the ranks with the immortals!

27 5 09
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 27 May 2009

the tumultuous twists of life and its ways well defined in these poetic templates.

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 December 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Bhuvana. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 22 December 2009

you bring out the grey side of life in various stages..with strong words

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Indira Renganathan 03 November 2009

A strong slap of words alive in the reader's vision....well said10

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Vijay Sai R 10 July 2009

powerful words....visible templates! 10+

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many moving images! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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