Temptation Poem by Seema Aarella

Temptation

Rating: 5.0


Deep within thy lovely eyes
Certain vicious desire lies
Can sense it in the way you see
Dazed … I feel like a zombie!

Far away from reach of mind
Some place that’s hard to find
There I lost my candid trait
Blinded by greed I took the bait.

Long ago I used to be sane
A tangled life now goes in vain
Lure of love thus misled
Life is done as faith is dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 17 June 2010

such a beautiful flow of words great write

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Reshma Ramesh 28 October 2008

hmmm thought provoking poem seema........one of ur best write........well done

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Sathyanarayana M V S 04 October 2008

A matured poetry in right symmetry and good words....this is the way several eminent poets like Ershad like the poems to be

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Raj Nandy 25 September 2008

A good poem! We grow and mature with time and progress with faith in God! Seema, have you read my - ' To err on the positive side '? -Raj Nandy

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Joseph Poewhit 22 May 2008

We all get tempted in life, it's just part of GOOD & EVIL

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