That
Blessed
Chocolate
Cake
Has blessed
Me so much
That I don't
Feel sleepy
And the night
Feels creepy.
I feel like
Camping
Outside
Beneath
The starlit
Sky, beside
My beloved
Sea, in a
Teepee,
Lest I feel
Weepy: (
[wrote this after I, Hubby and Kochi had chocolate cakes for dessert, nothing happened to them, they slept off and I kept waking......my son prefers having date (khajoor) cake and so he was okay]
A lovely poem well crafted and expressed. Chocolates have different effects in the body. To some people, they become energetic.
Oh...the poem is good and tasty..rhyming subtly in the right places. Nice work
Yeah the cake can keep you awake if there is caffeine. A stimulant.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dear Deluke and Rose Marie, Nice to know your views and thanks for your reviews :)