^^ That ^^ Poem by Aparna Chatterjee

^^ That ^^



That
Blessed
Chocolate
Cake
Has blessed
Me so much
That I don't
Feel sleepy
And the night
Feels creepy.

I feel like
Camping
Outside
Beneath
The starlit
Sky, beside
My beloved
Sea, in a
Teepee,
Lest I feel
Weepy: (








[wrote this after I, Hubby and Kochi had chocolate cakes for dessert, nothing happened to them, they slept off and I kept waking......my son prefers having date (khajoor) cake and so he was okay]

Thursday, November 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: cake
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aparna Chatterjee 22 November 2020

Dear Deluke and Rose Marie, Nice to know your views and thanks for your reviews :)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 November 2020

A lovely poem well crafted and expressed. Chocolates have different effects in the body. To some people, they become energetic.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 19 November 2020

Oh...the poem is good and tasty..rhyming subtly in the right places. Nice work

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Deluke Muwanigwa 19 November 2020

Yeah the cake can keep you awake if there is caffeine. A stimulant.

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