The Beautiful Rose Poem by Savio Antonio Vogt

The Beautiful Rose

Rating: 5.0


I long for you my rose,
you rose reder than red,
you fill my heart with your fire of red,
you took me out of the blue,
to show how you love me true,
I creeped into the scarlet night, to take it so bright,
to taste the lips of yours, so pink,
It tastes like wine, so sweet in spanish flavour.
you set me right into the track, and never again I broke my back,
you drive me wild, till my mind becomes miled,
I rejoyce deep down in my heart, your wine was like good poison,
which toilled me into the dozen, which killed my stone heart away.
and exposed my tender heart, so warm,
so warm enough that even the sun could not comfort love.
my beautiful rose, my beautiful rose, how wonderful you are!
to be the most trust worthy guiding star of mine..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 16 January 2009

Eloquently structured poignantly penned.........the longing of the heart to his most trust worthy guiding star...beautiful personification and nice metaphors used.10

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