The Charmer Poem by Paige Scott

The Charmer

Rating: 4.8


Softly the rhythm beats, pulses and beats;
Quietly the music notes fly.
Like a charmer it’s magical melodies
Mesmerize— enchant—lead away.
Softly…. quietly…. peacefully….dream—
Quietly the music notes fly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adam Sobh 13 April 2009

good job! u like music? keep up the good work!

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Paul Hansford 07 July 2009

Thus is a little gem. It is a gift not given to all writers, to know when enough is enough, and this is just right.

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Susan Jarvis 03 July 2009

The sound of each word sings out from this poem. Superb use of alliteration. Great stuff! S :)

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The order in which you use your words works so well. It let me through the different phases of music and I can see how the music is charmed. Beautiful writing. 10 Karin Anderson

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Kale Beaudry 04 May 2009

The repetition really puts this piece together, emphasizing the charm and melodious trance that music can put people into. I love music, and therefore this poem.

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Barry A. Lanier 16 April 2009

Wonderful to see you writing about music Paige. In all of my travels I find the absence of poetry about music somwhat perplexing in that music is poetry in motion..Sitting in a club with all my senses dispersed on a napkin I did write the basis of 'Jazzman', and every reading carries me back to that moment...etched in my mind forever.....the time....the place....the sights....the sound.....the scenery....the smells....the moods.....the smoke....the people......

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