The Chosen Path Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

The Chosen Path

Rating: 5.0


Even if there is no one-
to show you love
Even if there is no one-
to show you concern
Even if there is no one-
to show you kindness
Even if there is no one-
to show you their divinity
NO ONE
No near or dear one
YOU don't miss out on it
all these will reach you-
from somewhere..
from some one...someplace
IN THIS GRAND LIFE OF OUR'S.

ON THE CONTRARY
If you choose to shut yourself off
if you choose to pretend that-
you don't possess any of these-
which many of us do...
WE MISS OUT ON THIS GRAND LIFE
whatever or whoever we may be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 21 January 2009

True! such a strong words to ponder with during or at the end of the day.....10+++

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 January 2009

From love, we were created, and to the loved one, we will seek.Nice piece Samanyan!

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Sandra Martyres 17 May 2009

Philosophical yet simple and practical - lovely piece Samanyan...you are absolutely right it is for us to choose the path we want to tread, life offers all the possibilities..10++

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Naidz Ladia 17 May 2009

this is great dear sam, ...nice to read..naizz

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Indira Renganathan 26 January 2009

The way to live bold and beautiful...your definition is correct...good work 10

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Ency Bearis 26 January 2009

great wisdom..the philosophy of life in this write implied as true..10

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Lynda Robson 22 January 2009

When we walk along life's path we make choices, sometimes the wrong ones sometimes the right one's, your poem depicts this so well, interesting theme, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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