The Cinder And The Ash Poem by Samuel Stuart Pennell

The Cinder And The Ash

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Lexi stood next to me, on the porch.
He struck up a match to light a cigarette,
and the air was filled by a beautiful smell of phosphorous.

As his eyes widened and smoke
billowed and streamed from his nostrils,
he looked like a Japanese dragon.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 25 April 2010

Each red eye holds back the dragon. Japanese bonsai trees around stone gardens gold fish pond fed by, 'Shibumi hands always filled with orange paper lanterns....iip

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Ember Hathaway 25 April 2010

great poem! the last line is fantastic! it sets off the whole thing

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Jocelyn Humphries 01 June 2009

I've noticed your poems are very short... they are well written and mysterious though. Thank you for the poem.

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Michael Gale 20 January 2009

Great poem! Did he look like a dragon, with smoke breathed through nostril's swell? God bless poets, all-MJG.

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