The Crooked Ways Of The Tiny Birds 2 Poem by RIC BASTASA

The Crooked Ways Of The Tiny Birds 2



feelings are sometimes like the tiny birds
of summer feeding on a few grains

on the wide yards of the garden where the grasses
spread far

some do feel being smothered by the indifference of other
tiny birds

separated by the distance of the long lines of
parallel electric poles

imagine the image of tiny birds sitting in there
looking for pecking

one notices the vastness of the sky
the unfinished climb of the hill

the vanishing paths of trails long untrue
feelings like tiny birds fly away

but there is no reason to be afraid on the
facts of nonreciprocating birds

ah, the world is wide and too interesting
to be ignored

on a few grains one feeds upon
and having satisfied sits lonelier on the line of an electric pole

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 07 July 2017

I have read several of your pieces before commenting on this one. I was afraid that the refreshing spark of vibrant life I encountered in the first piece might have been an aberration. I was wrong. I was perhaps prejudiced by the sheer magnitude of your collection, presuming that substance would not be found in such quantity. I was very wrong. I anticipate with gladness the acquainting of myself with more of your work. Bravo!

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