The Demon Drink Poem by Invisible Man

The Demon Drink

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Tonight when I close my eyes
I watch in horror as my father dies
It's only the truth there is no lies
Lying on my bed my heart cry's
Night after night all I do I lay and weep
A years gone by and still no sleep
All I ask is a night off from this pain
Instead I hit the bottle as my eyes begin to rain
The room spins as the whiskey takes over
You died an alky maybe I should have stayed sober
Night after night I drink to my death
Until that time of my final breath
I start to think as I sit and cry
It's not my time I don't want to die
But it's too late now there's too much in my veins
Seems all we shared was a lack of brains
So as my eyes close over one final time
What a wasted life is my only crime
My eyes lock shut I see the light
The time as come to bid a
Final goodnight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ekaterina M. Polischuk 20 March 2012

perfect emotional poem! i don`t want to say about rhyme and the flow of the poem, they are great, but the meaning... it is incredible in its sincer touch to our hearts! it is sad and full of fears but it makes us think and watch the picture of the poem

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