(11-02-1996 / Holland Hospital)

What do you think this poem is about?

The Dog

The dog, I am, the one you'll never see
Tis because, this is the last I'll leave
The owners I had, who were great to me, were quickly saddened, when I ate through a bag of food, that was not for me
It was a spanking and a car ride west that was next to be
Now here I am, on the floor, some shot given to me
Heaven tis a nice place, for there is no more beatings for me
But all I want, one more time, is to be alive, happy, and free.

Submitted: Monday, June 25, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, June 27, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Wrote this poem about animals/dogs that are in shelters due to different/various reasons.

Comments about this poem (The Dog by Johanna Kortman )

Enter the verification code :

  • Saadat Tahir (7/7/2012 10:49:00 PM)

    sad sad sad....
    yes written from a tender vets vantage
    liked yer lines

    sat

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Ebi Robert (6/28/2012 1:38:00 PM)

    I can understand the stand of the dog. Well done.

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Johanna Kortman (6/27/2012 5:05:00 PM)

    Grunter, the dog was brought to the pound, and not adopted, so it was put to sleep.
    This is a mix between a true story, and not a true story.
    Dogs are brought to pounds everyday for many types of reasons, and when they are there too long, they get put to sleep.

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Shouvik Roy (6/27/2012 12:57:00 PM)

    simple and sweet, good job long way to go.. :)

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Read all 4 comments »
[Hata Bildir]