The Eternal Painting Poem by bubble rao

The Eternal Painting



Find your face in the darkness.
I can sense the shape so close to mine.
Been trying not to fall, it seems like I'm failing.
Trying not to get too deep, my mind shuts down.
Feelings for you overide my past and I forget reality as I sink into you. Can't this fail? And if it does what then?
Must I leave, and walk away?
Can't I stay with you forever surrounded by this new universe?
There is life in the smallest of your actions.
Everything that touches your light glows with beauty.
It alights the sky with an eternal paint brush.
Engufing me in the feelings of this Earth.
The heart that was encased in an iron sheild melts onto a canvas.
To, turn into an eternal painting to show the transformed world how you changed me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Toni Rumbel 07 June 2011

Wow, a very inpiring poem. I love it! The feelings expressed in this poem are those that I love and perhaps take for granted. It's hard to find someone you love, but when you do, you later on see that you have to let them go. Letting them go and moving on would be the hardest thing to do in a relationship.

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