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Ashraful Musaddeq
(6/8/2009 12:23:00 PM) |
'It wishes to spread love’s essence!
It wishes to spread sweet fragrance! '
A joyful poem that eliminate gloom from the mind.
Successful write...10+++
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Yoonoos Peerbocus
(2/24/2009 10:21:00 AM) |
short lines spiced with selective diction......................................
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
(2/17/2009 5:24:00 PM) |
Beautiful gentle picture of longing...flowers have such short lives.I gave you a ten.If you get a chance would you please read my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKUS? Thank you.
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Kesav Easwaran
(2/15/2009 9:19:00 PM) |
'with its soft petals, head bend
in its bough sleeps through the night! '...
nice imagery here...allegoric...write symbolic all through...good poem, Hema...10
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Yoonoos Peerbocus
(2/11/2009 9:19:00 PM) |
nature poetry ic cosmic......otherworldliness.....a flower is a guest.......time bound...all finely interconnected through the stanzaic pattern lovely to ponder on
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Lalitha Iyer
(2/11/2009 1:58:00 AM) |
Dear Malini, very beautifully written and emotionally too every flower though it may fall has got its own identity and personality and life, yes real life............I wonder if you have thought in this male world, a woman too is a flower.
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