how can I forget this day?
when you let me hear your voice
the voice with lyrics and melody
in this fine afternoon of Tuesday...
the song that you sing
with rhythm and tempo
is as soft as the breeze
in early morning dew...
the tenderness of your smile
and the attentiveness of your fingers
the timing of your bass
are the passes to success...
let me hold you forever
forever you'll be in my heart
without you am nothing
without you am a waste of time...
i made this piece 19th day of january,7pm tuesday...i love this day...i love this day, promiseeeeeeeeeee...
'Without you I am a Waste of time.'... No single person is a waste of time.. It's ppl who waste other ppl's time good write....
This poem has a very sweet lilting tone....Although I think you are too hard on yourself in the last two lines...Lovely piece otherwise 10
sweet, sweet write.... really sweet and with grace... as graceful as Lady Grace... i love this, Red lepz... 10+++ Maia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Graceful Lady - It is pleasure to be a guest on your site and comment on this fragrant poem. The poem has beautiful structure and beautiful lyrics - to melt you Guest's Heart just as yours has been melted by him. V 1 Sound is an amazing expression of energy with thousands of frequencies and harmonies and pitches. God in his wisdom has given us the gift of hearing to analyse and enjoy the magic of sound. Voice - lyrics - melody but the greatest of these is voice. V 2 The sensuousness of rhythm - tempo - pianissimo. V 3 Tenderness - attentiveness - timing - so so important in TRUE LOVE. V 4 The melody lingers on - this is so so beautiful. 'Let me hold you forever - forever you'll be in my heart - without you am nothing - without you am waste of time' - AWESOME. Thank for sharing Lady G - it scores a MAX. Love you lots in Poetry - JOHN X