The Innocent Poet... Poem by Annette Aitken

The Innocent Poet...

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The Innocent Poet...

is it innocence or naivety
that has lead me to this time
and place
stumbling my way through
this raging lush forest of thorns
off misspelt words
no real understanding or meaning
a novice to the structure of
stanza's, syllabus, of word count
all may as well be in another tongue.
What I do know, is the words in my head
fight the biggest battle of their life
longing to emerge from the shadows
stage a performance for all to see
and hopefully, admire.
Why can't I share in their confidence?
not looking for praise or approval
more escapism, the joy of sharing
maybe even comfort at the
finality of the finished product
can be its own reward.

by
A.A.17

Wednesday, January 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
insecurity, writting,
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 18 January 2017

A nicely written poem about the insecurity and self doubt experienced by an author while writing.Yes the joy of sharing is a reward in itself.Writing is like a journey towards a goal.The journey is as important as the goal and should be thoroughly enjoyed.

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Anthony Burkett 31 January 2017

You said that you were not a poet... Please pardon me if I disagree... you've shared your self doubts and your desires in this one... and thus bared your soul for all to see... Only a poet has that amount of courage! Well done!

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Tom Billsborough 30 January 2017

I have learned to look into the heart of what you are saying. Your odd errors of language really do not concern me. I understand what you are saying and like the way you say it. Others know this too and, like me, rate you highly as a poet. Have faith in your own ability, Annette. If you write like this people will listen.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 January 2017

The words in my head. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 January 2017

This is what experienced by most of the poets who begin their journey of expressing their thoughts weaving words. Most of us must have gone through this feeling. Very nice. Awesome drop.

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Seamus O Brian 18 January 2017

You cleverly and colorfully capture the throes of the novice (and experienced) writer, struggling with the doubt of her artistic expression. I love the irony that you have so elegantly expressed your anxiety of effective expression. Bravo, Annette! :) S

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