David DeSantis

Rookie (01/29/85 / Utica, NY)

**the Inverse Of Functionality - Poem by David DeSantis

Impatience.

it seems to seem
a change of scenery
may clear the vision.

Excess.

a symptom for some
of symptomatic
impatient leanings.

Spend thrift.

a week of weekly
paper green
medication.

Addict.

Sex-st ained sex tips
jarred whiskey
alcohol cleanings.

Impatient.

Clearly
cl eared
of any conscious
leanings.


Copyright (c) David DeSantis


Comments about **the Inverse Of Functionality by David DeSantis

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/27/2009 9:52:00 AM)

    Very metaphoric and philosopical writes describe the antiquities of day to day activities in the societies.Great writes my friend David! (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,634 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (2/17/2009 6:11:00 AM)

    David, it is true we all have our hang ups and little idols or things that motivate us. We seen meanings of certain things in life differently as well. A thought provoking piece. Loyd

    PS Have agreat day! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 16, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 22, 2009


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