The Inward Pleas We All Hold. Poem by Mandy Lee

The Inward Pleas We All Hold.

Rating: 3.1


Someone needs to hold my hand
and tell me it's okay.
Someone needs to warm my heart
and brighten up my day.

Someone needs to hold me close
and chase away my blues.
Someone needs to do it fast,
I'll even leave you clues.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 15 May 2011

A well crafted and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up! Great talent you got! Love and Peace for always!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 May 2011

Awesome work. Great imagery with nice style. Great write indeed. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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