The Journey Of Flight Poem by Kristina Londy

The Journey Of Flight

Rating: 5.0


Darkened corridors crowded in decayed, decomposed, detrimental movements
The childlike recipients floundering in a sea of confusion
Flower upon flower open to reveal the decaying mass of humanity
The darkness enveloping all receding light
The hearts withstanding death and yet withering in the touch of another
The moonlit voyager watching through blood-soaked sores as they seep through the woodwork
A childlike smile enveloping all being
The teeth of an elder decaying with pattern like tree rings
A monstrous demeanour hiding hideous feelings and horrors of the hounds
The hounds against the gaited door, writhing in agony as movements are tediously employed
Moonlight pictures the agony of lovers yet to receive their dividends
Illuminated, illustrious silhouettes pulsing in the heat of the night
The downpour finally cascading and flowered into ripples
The flag withering upon the touch of the wind’s force and folding upon the touch of night
And so it is the journey that comes with flight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 23 September 2011

This reminded me of mine called - Bitter Dungeons - The reference to hounds in this is interesting. Adeline

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Dave Walker 13 September 2011

Really good write. I've got to agree with The other comments. May i invite you to Read my new poem called, sleep safe.

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Ben Burger 11 September 2011

This is brilliant. This is the poetry I dream of writing. The way you have expressed yourself throughout the poem is incredible. The selection of metaphours is beautiful and the picture in my head is a movie. Please put more of your work on and keep on writing, your brilliant - RocknRolla

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Romeo Della Valle 16 August 2011

Impressive! A well penned and poignant write that clearly shows that poetry runs in your blood! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented poetic writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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