The Key Poem by Lyn Paul

We are riding to the same destination, our life just have different route then...so the challenges that we may meet...and no life seems so perfect as no road is having great without a depression base...i hope for you, myself and everybody to hold on, let be strong and wish us to be better day by day...Oh God bring us an easy way to meet the end of the destination in this world...dont worry Lyn, everything will be okay, ok! _Soul

Great poem Lyn, hope is something we should all try to hold on to - very wise and inspired write.

Nice one. Yes, we pass our emotion into our write to let it free for all.

Today may be lousy yet tomorrow is a new day. Hope is often your only answer and that is all that you can do... Yes, whatever dark the night is, it must be vanished and morning must come. Nicely and aptly envisioned. Enjoyed. Many thanks.

Condensed wisdom and a capsule of hope. Yes the Sun will shine tomorrow! !

An inspiring poem. Good rhyming and a good write.

A lot of positive thoughts, is there some deeper sadness behind this piece?

(The sun will come out tomorrow) ...this sentence is as emphatic as Hemingway's (The sun also rises) ...How focused and resolute the poet's mind is...as if she is sure how medicinal, how healing poetry can prove itself..the style of composition looks like recursive...one key idea runs the next line, that keeps the reader going alongwith the thought running! ! ! it's my first from this page and v.good! ! !