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Alison Cassidy (9/27/2009 7:42:00 PM)
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Your have a fine poetic voice with a penchant for the ladies. A masterpiece of a poem - fiery and passionate.
Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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Lovita Lara (9/21/2009 1:11:00 AM)
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wow, i love this poem...
so romantic... so nice..
keep it up
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Wassila Nader (9/19/2009 4:33:00 AM)
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your poem is really more than wonderfull..... I like it...
keep writing..
cauze i felt that I am the one who are talking not you
It's really more than wonderfull
THANK U for your comments :)
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Rachel Ann love, love, love and life Butler (9/19/2009 4:31:00 AM)
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here i am your panel which you seeks for...
waiting your touches...
waiting your colors...
needing you as paintbrush...
to draw me through your fires..
and to fire each others..
Rachel Ann Butler
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Almedia Knight-Oliver (9/17/2009 8:34:00 AM)
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' The Last With Lust'... you painted a beautiful picture of striking images and colored emotions. A masterful job, a 10+++
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Jackie Mcgee (9/16/2009 12:28:00 PM)
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oh you know how this makes me feel great job write more
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Maria Barbara Korynt (9/16/2009 7:44:00 AM)
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Poem, have maximum of emotion. Desire, passion and love, are starting imagination which is creating pictures causing shiver... for sensitive persons. It is feel, in every word. The author certainly gave a lot of heart and own emotions, what the poem became real. I like it very much it. (10v.) Greetings. :)
Maria Barbara Korynt
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D.D Sherman (9/16/2009 6:36:00 AM)
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very sensitive and romantic, the punctuations made it more sensual
do give feedback on my poems as well :)
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