The Lesson Poem by john tiong chunghoo

The Lesson

Rating: 4.5


(Poetry in progress)
the pigeon lost a partner
they were picking peas or
whatever in the street
- the Lord does get them fed
through his providence -
it is our naughty hands
that hold a different tale
my brother downed two wings
that had since flew and hovered
a sea of red, a choppy self
that refuses to die down
a storm did brew - as she or he -
i think it is a he - waited over the
tip of the roof for the other half -
two more wings to make life complete
was it one hour - such a long wait
before he flew away with a sky of emptiness

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David Wood 01 June 2013

A lovely write, I enjoyed the read.

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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