November 22,2009
Hands dry with cracking skin,
heads high as light falls dim,
delicate confessions between sheets.
A time, a place, a day, a dream.
A promise, patient virtue,
pure as gold.
[and then the let down.]
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice poem! ! ! I liked very much the last lines: 'A time, a place, a day, a dream. A promise, patient virtue, pure as gold.' It's not a good experience to be disappointed by someone, to have the heart broken by someone.But when this experience becomes a poem, it's so nice to read it.