The Life And Love Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The Life And Love

Rating: 5.0


It is me and alone
Words and time are gone
Still I am missing some one
Ground work has been completely done

Love was the main thing
In upper most chamber of mind
I knelt down to almighty
And sought real mercy

Life journey is not yet over
So I needed protection and cover
It was not forthcoming form any quarter
I looked panicky and miser

“Love” to me is an essence
So I run after and seek hence
As human being I come across
Many stages with mixed feelings

I look at wonderful eyes
And desperately try
What she really intends to convey!
I sink below much to dismay

What actually had I in mind?
The heart that had wished to be kind
Love for self and others too
The slogan was proving true

Many faces come on screen
But they do not look closer even
Some of souls really touch
The life and love is precious as such

I shall know it fully
When finish course successfully
How much was I right in pursuit?
When real time came to greet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2013

It is me and alone Words and time are gone

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2013

Al Pal1 hour ago are you trying to rhyme? it doesn't really, sorry i don't mean to get knit picky.... but i can't let it go. i love the message here.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2013

E.J Marshall2 hours ago kind of just seems like a bunch of writing with a vague point Comment +1 RHYMING

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2013

hope all was granted to the poet. Love is the only thing worth persuing. Lynn Petty2 hours ago Well said, well written, full of hope and expectation. Comment +1 .

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2013

Helena Allen2 hours ago i really liked it, beautiful! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2013

beautiful! naomi melton44 minutes ago very well written! Comment 0 Amazing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2013

Lisa Persinger2 hours ago Absolutely beautiful Comment +1 beautiful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2013

Violet Munger2 hours ago that was really well written, simply amazing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2013

NICE Naushaba Perveen Khan60 minutes ago GREAT PHILOSOPHY OF LIFE Comment 0 overall great job

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2013

Kianna Morgan2 hours ago the last four stanzas were incredible. The others, except the 2nd, didn't touch me as much as the others. when I said it out loud some parts didn't flow. Overall wonderful job. It is meaningful and you really made me feel your situation and longing. Comment +1 love is worth searching

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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