hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 32,918 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

The Life And Love - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

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It is me and alone
Words and time are gone
Still I am missing some one
Ground work has been completely done

Love was the main thing
In upper most chamber of mind
I knelt down to almighty
And sought real mercy

Life journey is not yet over
So I needed protection and cover
It was not forthcoming form any quarter
I looked panicky and miser

“Love” to me is an essence
So I run after and seek hence
As human being I come across
Many stages with mixed feelings

I look at wonderful eyes
And desperately try
What she really intends to convey!
I sink below much to dismay

What actually had I in mind?
The heart that had wished to be kind
Love for self and others too
The slogan was proving true

Many faces come on screen
But they do not look closer even
Some of souls really touch
The life and love is precious as such

I shall know it fully
When finish course successfully
How much was I right in pursuit?
When real time came to greet


Comments about The Life And Love by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/25/2013 1:27:00 AM)

    beautiful!

    naomi melton44 minutes ago
    very well written!
    Comment 0
    Amazing (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/25/2013 1:27:00 AM)

    Lisa Persinger2 hours ago
    Absolutely beautiful
    Comment +1
    beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/25/2013 1:26:00 AM)

    Violet Munger2 hours ago
    that was really well written, simply amazing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/25/2013 1:26:00 AM)

    NICE

    Naushaba Perveen Khan60 minutes ago
    GREAT PHILOSOPHY OF LIFE
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    overall great job (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/25/2013 1:25:00 AM)

    Kianna Morgan2 hours ago
    the last four stanzas were incredible. The others, except the 2nd, didn't touch me as much as the others. when I said it out loud some parts didn't flow. Overall wonderful job. It is meaningful and you really made me feel your situation and longing.
    Comment +1
    love is worth searching (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/25/2013 1:25:00 AM)

    Helena Allen2 hours ago
    i really liked it, beautiful! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/25/2013 1:25:00 AM)

    hope all was granted to the poet. Love is the only thing worth persuing.


    Lynn Petty2 hours ago
    Well said, well written, full of hope and expectation.
    Comment +1
    . (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/25/2013 1:24:00 AM)

    E.J Marshall2 hours ago
    kind of just seems like a bunch of writing with a vague point
    Comment +1
    RHYMING (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/25/2013 1:24:00 AM)

    Al Pal1 hour ago
    are you trying to rhyme? it doesn't really, sorry i don't mean to get knit picky.... but i can't let it go.

    i love the message here. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:20:00 PM)

    It is me and alone
    Words and time are gone (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013


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