Treasure Island

Jishnu Nair

(10/11/1992 / Kottayam)

The Limiting Point

Being in friend-zone
Was hell of an experience
It just sent my mind
Over the fence

I just wanted to shout
I just thought of getting out
It was way past the limiting point
Somehow I had to sever this joint

All i wanted was redemancy
Was hoping for it, too fancy? ? ?
I tried all that i could
All in the hope that you would
Understand my feelings as you should

But you were too adamant
On your decision to stay reluctant

I was the one frustrated
I was the one devastated
I called out to you
U didn't respond
It seems as though
Time has weakened our bond

Once you were lonely
And i had friends
Now you are lively
And i have dead ends

My feelings have to stop
It was time to take the mop
Clean your thoughts
Overcome the droughts
That made my heart so dry
Even a touch could now make me cry.

Talking to u was no more an option
Breaking off was my only solution
It took a lot of pain
To make that decision
My mind started to rain
The feelings of inhibition
Which i was going to feel
After the incision

I looked forward
To do what's right
Moved toward
What we call a fight

Now people may say
I m insane
They r welcome to stay
If they are so sane

I know i lost a friend
But sometimes things have to end
But that doesn't mean
I don't feel bad
For what you have done
I'll be really sad

I just live with with my hopes up
That one day I will cope up
I just just played my part
Maybe we were destined to be apart

But sometimes i wish
If there was a Milky Way
Things didn't have to turn out this way
There are other things that make me stay
It is just like what people say
Maybe its just best this way

Submitted: Sunday, June 22, 2014

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