In between the line
There’s chaos, unseen wonders
The side of life,
Not what was hoped for
Desolation, obliteration
Rejection, arrogance
Fraudulent, disgraceful
The side of death
Not as bad as it appears
New beginning, new life
Comfort, home
Love, wanted
The line between life and death,
The act of shedding the old to reveal the new.
I just read all of your poems, and I like this one the best. Actually, to be honest, it came pretty close with 'She's Gone'. If you asked me why I like it so much, then I truthfully wouldn't have an answer. You'll just have to trust me when I saw it's awesome. Peace out from the girlie scout, Tibby
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I agree with Tibby.Cool poemo Roger