vaibhav shah

Rookie (07-12-1984 / Dungarpur (Rajasthan))

The Lost Love - Poem by vaibhav shah

Was it a magic of my love
Or the miracle of your ignorance
That forced you to give me a call
Nothing happened new
You were the same without any change
I thought you have realized
Your mistake………..
That mistake which you never committed
As you think
But I was wrong
You spoke to me to convey a message
A message-so shocking and absurd
Though it was something real
Which could never be expressed
I wanted to shout at you
But something prevented me
It was the charm of your soft voice
The voice which could make me forget
Even my own identity and self
How could I tell you my state?
But…………..
I just want to pray for you
May Almighty God bless you.

17-3-2008


Comments about The Lost Love by vaibhav shah

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (4/5/2008 9:21:00 PM)

    the words pouring out...painting beautiful pictures
    good write, vaibhav (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Abha Sharma (3/19/2008 7:11:00 AM)

    You know you are an earnest poet, and your poems reflect sincererity, this too is also a nice one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 321 Points Seema Chowdhury (3/18/2008 9:20:00 PM)

    i hope you will get what you wish for in life. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 17, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 26, 2008


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