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Kasia Fedyk

The Perfect Moment

On a crossroad
by the shimmering light
between soul, mind and heart street
-in the middle of nowhere
love walked by

Her hands were small
her fingers long
her face shaped like an opal
with a crocked smile
that did more than just accent
her olive skin

Her eyes flickered
in the light
color, I can't hardly describe
somewhere between jade mixed with topaz
with a glimpse of pearls
and a touch of amber from the Baltic sea

Her dress like one huge snowflake
covered her thin frame
her hair was shade of gold
with red fire dancing on the ends

For a moment I thought I have lost my mind
(who am I kidding)
something else I noticed
She was holding my heart

Submitted: Thursday, July 05, 2012
Edited: Friday, July 06, 2012

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  • Bronze Star - 5,405 Points Neela Nath (7/7/2012 12:04:00 AM)

    You are the queen of description. This poem is full of meticulous details. Liked much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 154 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (7/6/2012 4:41:00 PM)

    between soul, mind and heart street
    -in the middle of nowhere
    love walked by.............................................by the gleams of art of love heart holds to belong
    on path of glimmering luminescence soul longs to behold....wonderful write by the imagery and metaphor, reader awes looking to hidden art of beauty,10+++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (7/6/2012 1:56:00 PM)

    Oh, that is just beautiful, , her dress like one huge snowflake, I love it. wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

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