The Perfect Moment Poem by Kasia Fedyk
The Perfect Moment
On a crossroad
by the shimmering light
between soul, mind and heart street
-in the middle of nowhere
love walked by
Her hands were small
her fingers long
her face shaped like an opal
with a crocked smile
that did more than just accent
her olive skin
Her eyes flickered
in the light
color, I can't hardly describe
somewhere between jade mixed with topaz
with a glimpse of pearls
and a touch of amber from the Baltic sea
Her dress like one huge snowflake
covered her thin frame
her hair was shade of gold
with red fire dancing on the ends
For a moment I thought I have lost my mind
(who am I kidding)
something else I noticed
She was holding my heart
The expression of color tones out of gem stones is superbly painted here! I liked this poem! !
Oh, that is just beautiful, , her dress like one huge snowflake, I love it. wonderful poem.
You are the queen of description. This poem is full of meticulous details. Liked much.
Really like this poem.... how someone holds your heart but you are unaware of it happening.
between soul, mind and heart street -in the middle of nowhere love walked by.............................................by the gleams of art of love heart holds to belong on path of glimmering luminescence soul longs to behold....wonderful write by the imagery and metaphor, reader awes looking to hidden art of beauty,10+++, thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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wow...this is beautiful.im in love...