Bee Kilpatrick


The Petal Falls - Poem by Bee Kilpatrick

The petal falls
The colors 
Of the apple blossom 
Rain on the eyes
Hungering for spring
Drinking in the color
Savoring them like 
They had to last forever
The children play
Adding to the  choir
That is already spring  


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I remember the apple blossoms
From my 5th grade class room
It was the most beautiful spring

Comments about The Petal Falls by Bee Kilpatrick

  • Gold Star - 36,896 Points Gajanan Mishra (2/18/2013 1:56:00 AM)

    already spring. good poem. thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (2/18/2013 1:51:00 AM)

    Brian Kilpatrick, brilliant poem, it halts and flows, it pauses and springs, it has the leopards spots and yet it hunts like the tiger. superb. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, February 25, 2013


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