The Promise Poem by jordan erickson

The Promise

Rating: 3.5


I hold the stone
close to my mouth
I kiss it ever so soft
I opened my hands
and realease the dove,
I whisper to it to go to the one I love.
soft is the night,
but this time I'm not going to loose sight.
This is a promise,
to the ones
I love,
so let the dove
soar to you
and bring the joy of love,
embrace you too.
My beautiful Mischeal
I hope you accept me as I climb from the well
I wish you to see
the me,
that hides,
behind these eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 May 2008

the promise would prevails...........hopefully.

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Kory Beach 21 October 2007

Sorry, man, but I just don't like it. Maybe it's just my sense of taste in poetry that doesn't like love poems, but it is just missing something... you know best though.

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aww...thats beautiful, jordan! i give this a 100%

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