The Rainy Season Poem by Max Reif
The Rainy Season
The rain's gone on two days,
I hope it goes on longer,
this welcome break from time.
The sun demands
a smile, a dance,
a day of work, or play.
The rain makes no demands,
It covers and it nurtures,
shelters seedlings
in its arms.
I'm not a fan of the rain unless I have a day off (which is not often lately) . Seems like people on DC highways just stop moving when they see a dropp (pomehunter has that tendancy to add extra p's to words and I do apologize) of water on their windsheilds. I liked the simplicity of your poem. It works especially well because you point out how do don't want to do much because of the rain. Take care.
'The rain makes no demands, it covers and it nurtures' - I love your perception of the rain and the way you have created such a vivid picture in so few words. A really refreshing read. (My perception of the rain is called 'Understated'.) Kind regards, Justine.
You have captured the spirit of the rainy season. Every word, every phrase, capturing a thought, a mood, a feeling. And then the beautiful unforgettable 'Sheltering seedlings in its arms'. Bravo!
I loved this Max! One of my favorite things to do is sit on my porch during a rainstorm............nothing better! Very nice poem. Sincerely, Mary
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I love nicely creative poems on natural events. Especially the last few lines of this one were well stated. Perhaps you could have extended it a bit more. Would have been nice to have the freshment of 'The Rainy Season' hang around longer. Thanks for sharing.