The Sea Salt Air Poem by Genevieve Surrender

The Sea Salt Air

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In caribbean breezes
the sea salt air
stings her nostrals
and the sand
whips her ankles.

Her eyes close
and all she can sense
is the hot sun
and warm breeze
with ocean spray.

She opens her eyes
and what she sees
is the red stoplight
staring at her
from above the intersection.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 07 February 2006

Once again you have impressed me with the change of direction in the poem. I always enjoy how I can actually feel your words, a feast for the senses.

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