Neela Nath Das

The Shiny Cloud - Poem by Neela Nath Das

The shiny cloud
called me to swing
with the wind.
So did I!
Along the cloud line
I ran and ran
chasing a beautiful
All the Stratus
clouds took leave
giving space
to cumulonimbus!
The cloud cried
but I came down as rain
and waited for cloud,
to hug being ambitious.
Other clouds jumped as
downpour with thunderbolt.
Frightened I
sought the cloud
who called me once
to swing with the wind.
But he never came.

My sky is still under shroud.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is fairy tale.

Comments about The Shiny Cloud by Neela Nath Das

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/25/2014 2:41:00 PM)

    A beautiful fairy tale. I loved each lines... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 98 Points Vivek Tiwari (2/24/2014 11:24:00 AM)

    The lines speak more than a fairy tale. on one hand it reminds the beauty of rainy mild clouded sky on the other hand it describes a beautiful phase of Mother Nature. love it greatly. 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,718 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/24/2014 8:20:00 AM)

    A compelling cloud of creativity. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, February 24, 2014

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