The Shiny Cloud Poem by Neela Nath Das

The Shiny Cloud

Rating: 5.0


The shiny cloud
called me to swing
with the wind.
So did I!
Along the cloud line
I ran and ran
chasing a beautiful
butterfly!
All the Stratus
clouds took leave
giving space
to cumulonimbus!
The cloud cried
but I came down as rain
and waited for cloud,
to hug being ambitious.
Other clouds jumped as
downpour with thunderbolt.
Frightened I
sought the cloud
who called me once
to swing with the wind.
But he never came.

My sky is still under shroud.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is fairy tale.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 25 February 2014

A beautiful fairy tale. I loved each lines...

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Vivek Tiwari 24 February 2014

The lines speak more than a fairy tale. on one hand it reminds the beauty of rainy mild clouded sky on the other hand it describes a beautiful phase of Mother Nature. love it greatly. 10/10.

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A compelling cloud of creativity. Well done my friend!

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