The Simple Words Of Moments Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

The Simple Words Of Moments

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the passenger
who takes the loneliest road,
sees the time
in which the trees
left a simple word,
in sheltered stillness,
on the mirage of horizon.

with a scarcity of lyrics,
as in, to stay, to leave...
the clouds upon the simple word
are our moments.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 12 February 2007

The caper of real words makes a tranquil phace in this feeble..... the passenger who takes the loneliest road, sees the time in which the trees left a simple word, the poet love to makes a celebration in her little World...

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Ivan Donn Carswell 12 February 2007

This is beautiful, like a minimalist painting with exquisite brush strokes executed exactly. It is a stark but potent picture of the moment... Rgds, Ivan

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