Pranab K. Chakraborty

Gold Star - 6,116 Points (West Bengal)

The Star Looks - Poem by Pranab K. Chakraborty

feel very close
its cosmic look
to me
as I try to penetrate
its depth

feel its coolest look
touches my eyebrows
and the
feel bent

the star
and me
relates each other
in cosmic expansion
but sorry to say
its not dream
the reality
as I kiss
the burning passion

Pranab k c

Comments about The Star Looks by Pranab K. Chakraborty

  • Rookie - 0 Points Greg Uhan (11/17/2012 10:41:00 AM)

    a inspired vision of rich, ingenious depth..beautiful..such magic in your words (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 194 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (11/7/2012 10:27:00 AM)

    cosmic look, cosmic expansion-the reality as i kiss-a lovely metaphysical touch through physicality (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,269 Points Vishal Sharma (11/7/2012 9:22:00 AM)

    u have cleverely written these lines, ....
    jst awesome..
    check my poems/......
    plzzz (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,008 Points * Sunprincess * (10/31/2012 11:45:00 AM)

    wow...i feel this line is the heart of the poem....fabulous. :)

    the star
    and me
    relates each other
    in cosmic expansion (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 19, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 20, 2012

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