The Storm Poem by Patricia Gale

The Storm

Rating: 5.0


Nature’s beauty flashed
Lighting the sky with ribbons of pure white
Seconds passed and the earth rumbled

Strong and forceful wind blew through my hair
Turning my face feeling soft cool drops caress my cheek
Danger and beauty all within the moment

Recalling the memories of a time far gone
When my soul rumbled
And drops of my heart feel open my face

Things seen through the eye of the storm
Memories flashing before the eyes of my heart
Watching and waiting

Realizing you and this day have a lot in common
Shaking, rumbling and things crashing
Flashes of beauty

I hear my heart as a thunderous sound rumbles….
No storm lasts forever only the after effects
And with time all will pass

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 22 March 2007

Storms are my favourite type of weather, just for the sheer intensity and the after-effects, nothing quite like it to shake things up. You've written here with heartfelt words of an experience that has moved you deeply. I'm loving this poem, most tender. HG: -) xx

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Nimal Dunuhinga 17 July 2009

Times and storms very memorable along this journey and this whispers of the milestones. Indeed a very great poem.

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Robert Howard 24 March 2007

Great metaphor applied with grace and insight.

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 23 March 2007

Pass, yes... but never from our hearts... lovely write

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Duncan Wyllie 22 March 2007

Wonderful words of wisdom, enjoy life today, live your story, this is just brilliant Patricia but then...that's you all over Love duncan X

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lOTS OF VERVE, AND VIVID IMAGERY SPARKLE THIS WORK WITH SPLENDOR... F.J.R.

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