ramesh rai

Gold Star - 17,730 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

The Storm Came - Poem by ramesh rai

The storm came without any notice
like the Kaal-Vaishakhi, to sweep the dry leaves
the storm came without any notice
to customize the nature, for pan-creation of life
the storm came to adjure the life.


Comments about The Storm Came by ramesh rai

  • Rookie - 372 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/7/2014 10:09:00 AM)

    Nice flow to this poem and good storyline. Enjoyed the read (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 7,744 Points Hazel Durham (5/5/2014 5:16:00 AM)

    Deep, meaningful write about the strength and force of nature let loose without warning! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,929 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (5/4/2014 10:07:00 PM)

    Precise and complete depiction of storms that come unpredicted and unwlecomed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,357 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (5/3/2014 7:06:00 AM)

    Storm comes suddenly. No warnings from the weatherman are heeded. Storm does its destruction. The storm came to adjure the life. Truth is nicely stated. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 2, 2014



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