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The Storm Of Life

The storm in life does not end
till the end of life
leading thousand of wishes
overwhelming thousand of virtues
penance for thousands cause
valiant efforts are made
to subjugate the wrath situation
the spring of calm contrivance
freezes all storms in life.

Submitted: Monday, July 09, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, July 10, 2012


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  • Romeo Della Valle (7/15/2012 7:09:00 PM)

    Deep and thought provoking my dear friend! Short but powerful with a clear message embedded on it! 10+++ Thank you for sharing this masterpiece! Keep it up! God Bless You and thank you for all your valuable comments on my poems! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/14/2012 6:41:00 AM)

    We must all shoulder Crosses in our path to whence we came, and to WHO, we came from by HIS own imagAt times, we view the world as if atop of a mountain and we see anathema that is being endured by many for unjust reasons...Crosses, ostensibly unbearable...Yet, I was taught as a child that our Creator will never level more than we can handle...and that if HIS nemisis, Diablios should rise from Hades to level his upside-down cross, that The Creator will bear that Cross with you, as depicted in the anonymous master-verse, Footprints In The Sand.....Excellent penning...mellifluously structured...~FjR~
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  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (7/14/2012 12:36:00 AM)

    overwhelming thousand of virtues
    penance for thousands cause

    wonderful lines to think deeply..

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  • Dave Walker (7/13/2012 8:26:00 AM)

    A great poem, really like it, a great write.

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  • Meda Martha (7/12/2012 3:28:00 AM)

    Precise and realistic.

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