The Sunrise Poem by vasudevan Desikachari

The Sunrise

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The night's darkness dwindles

And the sky above the eastern horizon

turns a vivid amber and lo,

From the horizon emerges the large

luminous Sun blossoming soon

to give us the glorious Sunshine

That perpetuates Life on Earth

As ordained by the Almighty.

Saturday, February 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: Nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 04 August 2015

Beautiful imagery, could feel myself standing there watching the sun come up, seeing the colors of the sky. Please watch your punctuation a little closer, sentences seem to run together. Otherwise, a truly great poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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