The Sunset Poem by Ema Malischek

The Sunset

Rating: 4.5


I got my head
laid on your small breasts
and was talking
about death.
You were so tender,
you were combing my hair
with your fingers,
which became
a hot sunset.
And in the morning,
when the one came,
who we both are in love with,
we´ve seen each other
dying.

Saturday, November 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: desire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 07 September 2015

A wonderful poem, Ema. Thanks

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 09 December 2014

who we both are in love with, we´ve seen each other dying. A beautiful love poem declaring death as the efficacy of love.Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Akhtar Jawad 15 November 2014

As far as I understood this poem the poet means death of ego. Ego of the two lovers was attacked by love and getting rid of ego the two lovers came close and close and merged in a single soul. A lovely poem............10

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Lyn Paul 15 November 2014

it is so important to be able to talk about death. Thank you and you have me wondering now about The Sunset.

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Heather Wilkins 15 November 2014

a beautifully written poem dealing with death

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