Whether it's Long Beach, California or Canton, Ohio this war is tearing me apart
If you walk outside your door you risk getting shot
If your white, black, latino, or asian
They will see your body on the street with a bullet wound in your back
Prostitutes on street corners and homeless people smoking crack
What is happening to this nation
Nothing but gangs and crimes
Pregnant girls flood the schools
People getting raped and murdered daily
I want to get away
Theres no place left thats safe
The fact of the matter is
The Undeclared War Is Spreading
huuuu... that's sad but pretty.... but sorry.. there's no peace in this world not until people stop being selfish but, i hope that day would come
You are bringing up the very important topic which concerns everyone from this argument, that we are people, irrespective of the nation, tongue, disagreements, habits, religion, itp. Problem which you are appointing - is growing! It is just the greatest threat. Apparently, that preventive measures and aren't restrictive sufficient. In the solving such matters not is responsibility of poets. However poets can with to claim action and the reaction a one unanimous voice to claim, the reaction and due action of people, which are supposed to see to it, must be right, for the safety - of every man! It very well, you are writing about it 'embarrassing' by problem. Someone should to be ashamed of, that they allowed such situation, which we have today. It is necessary to talk about it loud and clearly. The man must learn the 'prevention' - to prevent, and not to wait, 'as far as disease will develop'. Very interesting poem. (10v.) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt
Inever know that you recognise these things. Its nice of you to mention them, well done Kevin
WOW! finally the truth. somebody's got it right. it's sad....and it hurts....but the truth...always does
every line in this poem is true! ! ! ! thanks for sharing +10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is so sad and true at the same time.....Go write....The truth is always said in the best and worst ways.... <33Payyton