Kevin Fisher

Rookie (8/28/90 / Canton, Ohio)

A War Inside My Mind - Poem by Kevin Fisher

They say that there is good and evil in everyones heart
With me theres more
It feels like inside my mind is a neverending war
Some are good
Others are evil
Yet some who just want to fight
This mental war is killing me slowly
Please let it end tonight
Day after day my head is pounding
I no longer care who wins
I don't care if its my good or happiness
Or even my worst of sins
This war may only end when I do
I feel this day is near
Suicide is for the weak
So I'll die very naturally
By a war inside my mind


Comments about A War Inside My Mind by Kevin Fisher

  • Rookie enchanted G (9/30/2009 9:02:00 AM)

    WOW I love it. This poem embodies what I ave been feeling for several years. I refuse to take my life but somehow I find enough strength to move forward. I love it! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Tyease Collins (9/5/2009 2:21:00 PM)

    haha i guess im weak. Tried suicide once but no luck.
    God didnt want me to go so easily.

    But nice poem though ^.^

    -Ellie (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,333 Points Hebert Logerie Sr. (9/3/2009 9:56:00 PM)

    'Suicide is for the weak',
    ; it is heroic to struggle, to fight until death comes naturally. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Clara Odelia Ciutara (8/21/2009 8:43:00 PM)

    Hi Kevin, it's nice to read your poem. It's natural, and you could arrange such common things in a lovely way! Nice... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Claire Hastie (6/29/2009 4:16:00 PM)

    You actually remind me of myself. I too write a lot of angst, its a great relief to get it out on pen. My way of therapy too. I now try and write happy thoughts but its something I can't relate to as much. Your a good poet keep it up, and keep your pen closer than your enemies. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Xxx-reno0osh-xxx {admire Me} (6/8/2009 9:20:00 AM)

    i like it n i agree with ya tht suicide is 4 weak ppl...n i almost lost some1 who tryed 2 kill herself i'll make her read this pretacular sentence! ! gd job :) 10++ (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 782 Points Indira Renganathan (6/4/2009 5:38:00 AM)

    Perplexity of mind in well understanding words....mindful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie emily corbin (4/22/2009 4:01:00 PM)

    I really like this poem. It's different from anything else I've ever read in a good way. Keep up the really awesome work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie June Feir-Cruz (4/14/2009 8:32:00 PM)

    Again, I am right: You are a strong and a brave individual. We are always at odds with ourselves and your art is your salvation and your saving grace. Remember that: you will never be insane :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Private Girl (4/11/2009 3:44:00 PM)

    i like your style, nice one keep it up xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gina Van Wolf (3/27/2009 7:03:00 AM)

    I think this really well written. You get the point across clearly without losing any sort creative sense. Nice work :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aisha Love (3/16/2009 4:13:00 PM)

    you write very good poems (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kallie Madison (3/13/2009 10:47:00 AM)

    you good! ! love it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie A e (3/12/2009 9:16:00 AM)

    wow, you are really good, very true to. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Janell Cressman (3/11/2009 8:35:00 AM)

    Wow that is a very strong and moving poem. i think in one way or another weve all been there.
    nive writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thomas Coltrin (3/10/2009 2:04:00 PM)

    its good and i liked it alot.........well written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tanesha Davenport (3/8/2009 2:05:00 PM)

    i like this one....and thanks for commenting on poems ur pretty good...love ur poems (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Costa Anakiev (2/28/2009 12:03:00 PM)

    full of feeling. anyway, ask god. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 27, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 14, 2011


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