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10.0
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There is a wind behind everyone
It watches us,
whatever we do
It holds us,
whenever we woo
It chases us,
wherever we go
It's always around us,
however we may not know
There is a wind behind everyone
It's wonderful,
it's innocent
Though we never see it,
It's never ignorant
It blows the dark clouds away
and lightens our day
It understands our wishes
and demos our promises
It carries our ambitions
and knows our emotions
There is a wind behind everyone
It dries our tears,
whenever we cry
It conveys our impressions,
when we feel shy
It reminds us,
what's good and bad
It's always with us,
whether we're happy or sad
Deependra Kumar Jha
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Saturday, March 21, 2009 |
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Saturday, March 21, 2009 |
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Comments about this poem (The wind
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Deependra Kumar Jha
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surya . (8/24/2009 11:28:00 PM)
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a beautiful poem with a particular style that is appealing and interesting. says many useful tips too.
voted10
surya
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Kesav Easwaran (3/27/2009 3:02:00 AM)
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a wind...protective loving and comforting...'faith'ful wind indeed...unusual idea well poetised...
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anurag duggal (3/22/2009 6:32:00 PM)
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Love the poem 10+++
Keep writing............
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kandis salasar (3/22/2009 5:40:00 PM)
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the wind, tangible but unseen...thanks
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Seema Chowdhury (3/22/2009 10:03:00 AM)
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There is a wind behind everyone.... a lovely poem indeed. touches the heart of the reader.
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Sathyanarayana M V S (3/22/2009 1:47:00 AM)
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A good poem with depth and wonderful imagery. Yes! we can always relate to nature in one way or other or in all ways. Similar to my earlier poem Bells, where I tried to relate the sounds of Bells with human thoughts..etc.
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Chitra - (3/22/2009 1:15:00 AM)
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a strong symbolic write...the wind of support, stability and hope
reading these inspiring lines i find myself all set to cope
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Catrina Heart (3/22/2009 12:31:00 AM)
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Such a symbolic composition, informative, making us aware of the winds essence. The wind is our twin more of a shadow that knows all our feelings. It gives us happiness, life and love..........lovely poem...10
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Mohammed Al-balushi (3/21/2009 11:29:00 PM)
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i fly with wind in ur poem. i like the flow of words, nice poem
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Naidz Ladia (3/21/2009 8:09:00 PM)
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my gosh, , what a beautiful poem...i like this much especially this time...thru this wind, it inspires me..thru this wind it swifts all worries..hope tears will not come anymore..this poem is well presented...all words are lined with too much tenderness, , , gentle..these words of yours are very loving...very caring...thats why, , i give 10 to this poem...it makes me realize that life is still beautiful..
naizz
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