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Up above the sky
In the faces of aloof stars
I see images of my dreams
Ever growing in stature
My aspirations
Larger-than-life
Sometimes, I wonder
whether I have devised my dreams
or dreams have invented me?
Years passed by,
among my endless dreams
a few came true
and many fell through
But, each of my dying dreams
gave birth to a new one
Though,
My hairs threaten to turn white now
and wrinkles tardily become possessive
My eyesight warns me of an eternal sunset
and smiles often betrays my true feelings;
yet, I dare to dream!
and wish to chase it
beyond the horizon
It's true!
I love chasing my dreams
I wanna catch up with
the flying butterflies
I wanna talk to my shadow
during the fading lights
I wanna hold forever
the illusive rainbows
And,
I wanna chase my dreams
until my own fantasies
take control of myself
and my desperations
make me feel that
'reality hurts'
Deependra Kumar Jha
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Saturday, February 21, 2009 |
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Sunday, February 22, 2009 |
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Comments about this poem (My dreams and I
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Deependra Kumar Jha
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/22/2009 4:24:00 PM)
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‘But, each of my dying dreams
gave birth to a new one…’
It is recycling of dream in new concept and canvas.
Dream is cream of life.
Ten++
Ms. Nivedita
Thanks for comment on my poem.
Cordially invite to read and comment on
Enigmatic Navel
Lie Sly or other poems.
niv
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Nikunj Sharma (8/9/2009 11:00:00 PM)
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I wanna talk to my shadow
during the fading lights
I wanna hold forever
the illusive rainbows
nice words, deep meanings.......may the rainbows be all yours.... please read in my poems, MY DREAM and ASPIRATION.......
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kandis salasar (3/6/2009 1:16:00 PM)
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this poems resonates among many, i love it!
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Raja Basu (3/1/2009 6:29:00 AM)
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Hi Deependra, the greatness of a poet lies in his ability to express a simple thing in a captivating manner. And this poem proves that you have that talent. Great work!
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Kesav Easwaran (2/22/2009 8:24:00 PM)
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'among my endless dreams
a few came true
and many fell through
but, each of my dying dreams
gave birth to a new one'...
words enriched by truth and beautiful philosophy...hopes expectations and dreams combined, life really is...good piece 10
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Stacey Watts (2/22/2009 6:11:00 PM)
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Beautiful poem about dreams. Follow your dreams always.
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Naidz Ladia (2/21/2009 11:51:00 PM)
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nice words, , , , , , i like the thought of this piece of yours...cheers...
naizz
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Maia Padua (2/21/2009 11:47:00 PM)
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great dreams...in this wonderful piece...
.nice dreams to achieve and became real...
wonderful imaginations formed into wonderful lines..
i love this...inspiring...
10+++
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Barry A. Lanier (2/21/2009 11:45:00 PM)
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'When we forget to dream we forget to breathe'-BAL
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Barry A. Lanier (2/21/2009 11:44:00 PM)
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Really powerful imagery with the selective utilization of metaphor and personification, , , , and also the intense message tranformed into a spiritual direction where the dream is the moment where we can begin to meet ourself before our arrival..............
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