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Whenever I'm in need,
you always stood by me
In the times of trouble,
during the moments of despair
You say, you're my shadow,
that you will follow me forever
I love you so much,
but I hate shadows
Shadow grows and shrinks,
with fading light
I don't want you to,
ever disappear from my sight
You urge me to be practical,
and come out of my illusions
Be someone real and strong,
don't make castle of sands
As without a single warning,
life may slip from our hands
Nothing is timeless,
except the memories
Cherish every moment of togetherness,
and love without condition
because,
Love that comes with a reason,
may vanish with changing season
I agree with you as always
but do you listen to what my heart says?
Deependra Kumar Jha
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Deependra Kumar Jha
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Seema Chowdhury (8/23/2009 10:03:00 PM)
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i hope your heart's voice reaches the heart of the one you are trying to get to.
good luck, nice poem.
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Ency Bearis (8/18/2009 6:13:00 AM)
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enchanting poem....well expressed emotion and written well....
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Obinna Eruchie (8/17/2009 2:02:00 PM)
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A wonderful and a distinct way of penning a love poem.
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Kesav Easwaran (8/17/2009 8:28:00 AM)
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Love that just accompanIes may leave at one time or other in life...love that gets immersed into, will never make a shadow through out your life journey...two different perspectives of love there...good work...thanks...10...
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Mohammed Al-balushi (8/16/2009 11:38:00 PM)
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Love that comes with a reason, may vanish with changing season, true i agree with you, lovely poem dear Deependra, wish you all the best
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Luwi Habte (8/16/2009 11:19:00 AM)
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nice poem
well penned and sounds good as well
Luwi
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Sathyanarayana M V S (8/16/2009 9:54:00 AM)
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Good poem. First she says she would be your shadow. But dont want that! And go on defining a shadow and you want her to be for ever on your side. Very good thought, well composed.
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surya . (8/16/2009 6:39:00 AM)
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love with out condition sure works and satisfies one, s inner feelings.nice write
voted10
surys
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~ Jon London ~ (8/16/2009 5:37:00 AM)
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Lovely piece my friend....they who share the same value of what a heart gives to us all...Love......and the greatest of lifes feeling....beautiful work Deependra 10
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