The Withered Gardens Poem by Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

The Withered Gardens

Rating: 4.1


the blank sheets are hungry
so let the ink get the summary
what happened last night
not forgotten just still unknown

no other worlds to choose of
just escape to your dream world
the kindness, patience is kindness
for a world so cold and so mindless

the only way to cross the ocean but the bridge
is to swim and call yourself Malik from old age
as the sky weeps upon you and the bridge

behold this executioner
his hell begins at the mirror
forsaken all the burdens
forsaken the withered gardens

choose which among us to kill
death has no power over my will
you are dead to their eyes
you cheater, and who can denies?

this world was ended since yesterday
while we were wishing to find a way
through war, through peace
this world won't fit the sceneries

this world was ended since yesterday
while we were wishing to find a way
through war, through peace
this world has its cruel lullabies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Lost.. 29 October 2009

a very nice poem :) thanks.

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Obinna Eruchie 29 October 2009

'the blank sheets are hungry / so let the ink get the summary / what happened last night / not forgotten just still unknown' interesting use of words.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2009

this world was ended since yesterday while we were wishing to find a way through war, through peace this world has its cruel lullabies..............the world has its cruel lullabies andhas ended yesterday........it is so much noble hinking fo rwishing or to find a ways...lovely presenttion....10

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Omar Ibrahim 29 October 2009

you are the best egyptian here in poemhunter! ! ! this poem shows that....jus t keep writing to keep your self at the top..

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Eyan Desir 29 October 2009

fine poem good write

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Catrina Heart 31 October 2009

Great and fantastic poetry shared......well done! ! !

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Prakash Mehra 31 October 2009

I liked it very much. great work.

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Merna Ibrahim 31 October 2009

A great poem! ! .....well done...10++

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Ahmed Abdalla 31 October 2009

Great lines! well expressed,9/10. keep it up :)

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Romeo Della Valle 29 October 2009

Great work, as a true citizen of the world I really identify with your thoughts, well penned, you got my vote and rating, best 10+.hope you have a chance to read my lately posted works, 'A LOVE'S GAME', 'A QUEEN WAS BORN', and 'WHEN LOVE IS GONE', Love and Peace, Romeo

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